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작성자 : tjg*** · 2017-09-07
Hello, my name is Lily.
I'm eleven years old. I like dolls, my favorite color is yellow. I'm small, but, I'm flexeble. Bcause, I practice ballet seens I was seven. I like my teacher. I like Korean traditional dance, I have maye prize. I like one-piece, My hobby is singing and dancing. My favorite subjact is music.
I'm eleven years old. I like dolls, my favorite color is yellow. I'm small, but, I'm flexeble. Bcause, I practice ballet seens I was seven. I like my teacher. I like Korean traditional dance, I have maye prize. I like one-piece, My hobby is singing and dancing. My favorite subjact is music.
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Hello, my name is Lily.
I'm eleven years old. I like dolls, my favorite color is yellow. I'm small, but I'm flexible because, I practice ballet since I was seven. I like my teacher. I like Korean traditional dance, I have my prize. I like one-piece. My hobbies are singing and dancing. My favorite subject is music.
I'm eleven years old. I like dolls, my favorite color is yellow. I'm small, but I'm flexible because, I practice ballet since I was seven. I like my teacher. I like Korean traditional dance, I have my prize. I like one-piece. My hobbies are singing and dancing. My favorite subject is music.
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