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작성자 : kms*** · 2017-09-07
Title : I would like to learn when I get older.
I want to learn about tennis
Because I like sports
I want to learn many kinds of sports
so I want to learn about tennis
Second I want to learn about cooking.
Because If I learn cooking than I can make
many food. Then I want to give my food to my parents or friends.
I want to learn about tennis
Because I like sports
I want to learn many kinds of sports
so I want to learn about tennis
Second I want to learn about cooking.
Because If I learn cooking than I can make
many food. Then I want to give my food to my parents or friends.
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CORRECTION/S:
I want to learn about tennis because I like sports. I want to learn many kinds of sports so I want to learn about tennis. Second, I want to learn about cooking because if I learn cooking then I can make many food. Then I want to give my food to my parents or friends.
FOCUS ON capitalization and punctuation. Study more about prepositions.