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작성자 : bos*** · 2017-09-07
I want to live in the countryside.
Because in countryside I didn't have to study.
because in countryside there is no school and academy.
And I can play all day in the road or hill and play in the sand.
I can have a free life in the countryside.
The countryside weather will be sunny.
At the night I can see the few stars on the night sky.
Because in countryside I didn't have to study.
because in countryside there is no school and academy.
And I can play all day in the road or hill and play in the sand.
I can have a free life in the countryside.
The countryside weather will be sunny.
At the night I can see the few stars on the night sky.
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I want to live in a countryside because there, I don't have to study. There is no school neither academy in countryside. I can play all day in the road, hill and on sand. I can have a free life in the countryside. It's always sunny and at night I can watch the stars.
Be mindful of the following:
- Capitalization
- Choice of word
- Article
- Verb tenses