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작성자 : lov***   ·   2017-09-06

White House white out

Josh, Dink and Ruth Rose went to the Washington D.C for vacation. They wanted to see the White House.
When they passed the White house. they saw KC, president child and the dog, Natasha. She said "Let's play at White House". and, They looked for the dog, but she was gone.
When they found her in a ban, they rode the ban to save her, and They were kidnapped regardless the dog-napper's mind. They were brought to strange place.
KC put her dog next to the woman. When they came back, they didn't see both of the woman and the dog.
They made a campfire to stay safely. They all wanted to sleep.
Dink woke up and saw the man and the woman.
They became the kidnappers. The kids escaped after a time they saw a snow mobil with two teenagers.
The teenagers called the President, and the kids went to White House safely.
At that night, Josh, Dink and Ruth Rose sleeped at White House. They saw Lincoln ghost in real!

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White House White Out

Josh, Dink and Ruth Rose went to the Washington D.C for a vacation. One day, they passed by the White house. They saw K.C, the president's child together with her dog, Natasha. She invited them to play at the White house with her. They accepted her invitation yet they noticed something. Her dog is missing. They look for the dog around the White house and found her inside a van. They tried to save her but they found themselves kidnapped as well. They were brought to a strange place and they discovered where Natasha is. They tried to know where the exit first and came back where they saw the woman and Natasha. Sadly, they were gone. They made a campfire to keep themselves warm they took a nap and when, Dink woke up he saw the kidnappers. They managed to escape after they saw a snowmobile  with two teenagers. The teenagers contacted the President, the problem was resolved and they were bring back to the White House safely. At that night, Josh, Dink and Ruth Rose slept at the White House and they saw the ghost of Lincoln!


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