We can't prevent future wars. It's because most of the countries have problems with each other. So if it get worse. A war might start. North Korea is now working on their nuclear weapons and getting ready to attack Guam. If they do this, a war will start for sure. We have to pray that Kim Jong Un talk with other countries specially with USA and South Korea, because if he uses their nuclear weapons we will die. South and North Korea have to unify as soon as possible for us to prevent world war. But, I think it's impossible because Kim Jong Un doesn't want to talk or listen to UN.  North Korea will make more nuclear weapons and they said there is IS. IS is killing a lot of people, like doctors and diplomats. These are some of my reasons why I think future wars couldn't be prevented.

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Thank you so much for this long homework Jack. I have learned something from it which is great. I think it's somehow scary. But, you have to check out the corrections that are written here. See you next meeting.