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ranking stone

작성자 : don***   ·   2017-09-05

<<품계석(경복궁에 있는 것)>>

This is a ranking stone that is called 품계석.
Ranking stone shows official′s rank. In the Joseon dynasty, there was from the first rank to the 9th rank. And this rank diveded into 정 and 종.
You can see the letter. This is 정, and that is 종. 정 is higher than 종.
From the first rank to the 6th rank, 정 and 종 are divided into 2 grades again. higher, lower.
So, the number of grades is 30.

There are 24 ranking stones here. The 12 ranking stones in the east is for civil officials, and the 12 ranking stones in the west is for military officials.
There were 2 ranking stones for from the first rank to the third rank. Also, there was only 1 ranking stone for from the 4th rank to the 9th rank. So, There were 24 ranking stones here.
At important national events such as morning assembly, congratulatory ceremonies, and the king's birthday, these officials stood in line next to their ranking stone.
Civil officials stood in the east and military officials stood in the west. The closer to the king, the higher the rank.

Today, the level of public servants in Korea is also from level 1 to level 9 due to the influence of the rank of Chosun Dynasty

답변

This is a ranking stone that is called ?°°?¼?.
Ranking stone shows official rank. In the Joseon dynasty, there was a ranking from first to ninth rank. This rank divided into ?¤ and ?¾.
You can see them like this ?¤ and ?¾. From first to sixth rank, ?¤ is higher than ?¾. ?¤ and ?¾ are divided into 2 levels the higher and lower.
So, the number of levels are 30.

There are 24 ranking stones here. The 12 ranking stones on the east is for civil officials and the other 12 ranking stones on the west is for military officials. There were also 2 ranking stones for from the first rank to the third rank. Also, there was only 1 ranking stone for from the 4th rank to the 9th rank. So, There were 24 ranking stones here. The officials were standing next to their ranking stone on their important national events such as morning assembly, congratulatory ceremonies, and the king's birthday.
Civil officials stood in the east and military officials stood in the west. The closer to the king, the higher the rank.

Today, the level of public servants in Korea is also from level 1 to level 9 due to the influence of the rank of Chosun Dynasty.


Hi, James! Thank you for sharing your scenario with me. It's my pleasure to help you with this. I hope it would help you a lot.

Be mindful with the following:
- repetition of the word
- period
- organizing of the sentence
- preposition (on, in)

- Teacher Elle

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