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Home work Novel 8
작성자 : har*** · 2017-09-04
Jack was scared a huge ant come close to him.It has sharp teet.
But then, Kevin saw Jack and swong at the sored at the ant.
The ant run away!but then more ant surrounded Jack and Kavin.
They captcherd Kavin and Jack.They carried them into a hole.
The queen ant come infront of them.She said.Oh!At last,I have a little humen!
Kevin and Jack surprised.What!Pat?Aaa!N...no...oo...n...nooo...ooo....
Gard!put them in the cage!And feed them.What will I do??????????
-See you next at Home work Novle 9-
But then, Kevin saw Jack and swong at the sored at the ant.
The ant run away!but then more ant surrounded Jack and Kavin.
They captcherd Kavin and Jack.They carried them into a hole.
The queen ant come infront of them.She said.Oh!At last,I have a little humen!
Kevin and Jack surprised.What!Pat?Aaa!N...no...oo...n...nooo...ooo....
Gard!put them in the cage!And feed them.What will I do??????????
-See you next at Home work Novle 9-
답변
Jack was scared, a huge ant come close to him. It has sharp teeth. But then, Kevin saw Jack and swung at the sored at the ant. The ant run away! but then, more ants surrounded Jack and Kavin. They captured Kavin and Jack. They carried them into a hole. The queen ant come
in front of them. She said, "Oh! At last,I have a little
human!" Kevin and Jack were surprised. "What! Pat?
Aaa! N...no...oo...n...nooo...ooo...."
Guard! put them in the cage! And feed them. What will I do??????????
-See you next at Home work Novel 9-
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