회원가입 로그인

학습방

원어민 일대일 맞춤 회화 수업 토크펀! 영어 정복의 꿈을 이루세요!

영작문첨삭

homework

작성자 : min***   ·   2017-09-05

No, I don't. Because many animals are wild but they keep in zoo, they get a lot of stress.

The good point is many people can wild animals like lions, elephants.
The bad point is animals have stress.

No, I think that is bad idea. Because their owner deal about wild animals and they make wound.

답변

No, I don't. It is because many animals are wild but if they keep it in zoo; they will get a lot of stress.

The good point is that many people can see wild animals like lions and elephants.
The bad point is that animals could get stressed.

No, I think that is bad idea. It is because their owner deals with the wild animals and they can hurt other people.

 

Things to remember:

 

1. Word choice

2. Proper use of punctuation mark

3. Conditional sentence

 

Thank you for sharing your ideas about the questions, Elin! I hope to receive a longer homework next time. Thank you and see you soon!


목록으로