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작성자 : bos*** · 2017-08-31
I think downgraded of the Pluto is right thing.
because Pluto is not like a other planet.
first, Pluto is lot smaller than other planet.
two, The Pluto circle the sun drawing oval but other planet spin the sun
round and round.
because of Pluto spin the sun drawing oval at 1979~1999 the Neptune was a
farrest planet from earth.
because Pluto is not like a other planet.
first, Pluto is lot smaller than other planet.
two, The Pluto circle the sun drawing oval but other planet spin the sun
round and round.
because of Pluto spin the sun drawing oval at 1979~1999 the Neptune was a
farrest planet from earth.
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I think downgrading Pluto is a right thing to do. Because Pluto is different from other planets.
First, Pluto is smaller compared to other planet.
Second, Pluto circles the sun in an oval motion but the other planets orbit the sun in a circular motion. Pluto rotating around the sun drawing oval in 1979-199. Neptune is the farthest planet from the sun.
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