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Homework-Lina
작성자 : a57*** · 2017-08-31
My favorite dessert is icecream.
People say it is not healthy because it contains many sugar.
I think icecream is very delicious. They are soft and smell good.
Iceream easy to make too.
First you put juice in the cup and then you just put the cup on the machine.
I like icecream because they are delious and easy to make.
People say it is not healthy because it contains many sugar.
I think icecream is very delicious. They are soft and smell good.
Iceream easy to make too.
First you put juice in the cup and then you just put the cup on the machine.
I like icecream because they are delious and easy to make.
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My favorite dessert is ice cream.
People say it is not healthy because it contains much sugar.
I think ice cream is very delicious. They are soft and smell good.
Ice ream easy to make too.
First, you have put juice in the cup and then you just put the cup on the machine.
I like ice cream because they are delicious and easy to make.
People say it is not healthy because it contains much sugar.
I think ice cream is very delicious. They are soft and smell good.
Ice ream easy to make too.
First, you have put juice in the cup and then you just put the cup on the machine.
I like ice cream because they are delicious and easy to make.
Thank you for doing your homework, Lina.
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