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작성자 : syw*** · 2017-08-31
Today, I'm not happy because I wronged many questions in my english achademy class. There were 121 questions in the test. Most of the times, I was perfect or wrong 1. I was so sad when I knew 12 questions in the test. I want to cry. Today was bad day....................
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Today, I???m not happy because I got a lot ofmistakes in my English academy exam. There were 121 questions in the test. Most of thetimes, I get a perfect score or have a single mistake.I was so sad to know that I only got 12 correct answers.I want to cry. Indeed, today is a bad day.
Hi Alice! I truly understand how you feel for it alsohappened to me when I was your age. It???s just normal because you are still inthe process of learning. What???s important is that you learn from your mistakes.I know you???re a smart girl. Keep on fighting!
Points to remember:
-Proper capitalization
-Proper tenses of verb
-Choice of words