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작성자 : kms***   ·   2017-08-31

We shouldn't eat junk food, Because junk food is not good at
body.
We shouldn't eat junk food, Because they make my body bad.

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CORRECTION/S:

    We shouldn't eat junk food, because junk food is not good for the body. We shouldn't eat junk food because it makes my body bad.

BE CAREFUL of capitalization of conjunction (because) and preposition (at).

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