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작성자 : sea*** · 2017-08-30
What is importance of numbers? (Sean)
Numbers are important because if we don't have numbers, we can't call someone.
We don't know our car or home either.
We can't figure out mathmatics problem.
We can't count when we have to read numbers.
We don't have money if we don't have numbers.
Numbers are important because if we don't have numbers, we can't call someone.
We don't know our car or home either.
We can't figure out mathmatics problem.
We can't count when we have to read numbers.
We don't have money if we don't have numbers.
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Numbers are important because if we don't have numbers, we can't call anyone. We don't know our car number or home addresseither. We can't figure out mathematics problem. We can'tcount when we have to read the numbers. We don't havemoney if we don't have numbers.
Good job Sean!
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