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Pressuring

작성자 : jci***   ·   2017-08-28

Have you get pressuring from someone? I guess you have got stess from with your parental pressure. How I know that? Cause I got that one, too. Then, how we can improve relationship with our parents?
First, when mom and I have diffrent ideas about how keep health, my mom always said "Jace, I hope you exercises more than now. if you become a high school, then you have to study more. Your health can't keeping and you will get hard to study. I just worried you.". At that time, I don't want to exercise, but from now on, I exercise twice for a week. Because I effort understand my mom. So, when you want to reduce your stress from pressuring, you have to try understand others.
Second, when my parents worried my grades because my behavior after finished test, they nag to me(not much). Then I feel pressuring from my parents. So I try convinced like, "I want to read books and relax now. It is too fast to study. It's only been two weeks since I finished the exam. Please, trust me." Then, my parents understand me(maybe) and I feel they will trust me from the look of them. So, when you want to gone your stress from pressuring, you have ro try convince the others.

Thank you for reading!

답변

           Did you get pressuring from someone? I guess you have got stress from your parents. How did I know that? It is because I got that one, too. Then, how can we improve our relationship with our parents?
First, when mom and I have different ideas about how to be healthy, my mom always says "Jace, I hope you exercise more. If you become a high school student, you have to study more. You should keep being healthy
 and it will become hard to study. I am just worried about you.". At that time, I don't want to exercise, but from now on, I exercise twice a week because I understand my mom. So, when you want to reduce your stress from pressuring, you have to try to understand others.
Second, when my parents are worried about my grades because of my behavior after I finished the test, they nag at me (not much). Then I feel pressuring from my parents. So I try to convince them like, "I want to read books and relax now. It is too fast to study. It's only been two weeks since I finished the exam. Please, trust me." Then, my parents understand me (maybe) and I feel they will trust me by the way they look at me. So, when you want to be stress-free from pressuring, you have to try to convince others.

Thank you for reading!


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Thank you for sharing Jace! <3












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