On the other hand, the device has so many wonderful applications, yet it could give us many serious illnesses. Isn't it shocking how much of an impact one small thing can have on you? Also, there are many accidents because of the excessive use of this device. Since smartphones are addictive, people are often too focused on their devices even when they're walking in the streets, which could lead to a very unlikely situation.Nowadays, most of the people in the streets are busy texting and chatting with other people via smartphone. Hence,they can't see the traffic lights, cars, buses or even the other people,resulting in a distracted walking, which can cause many accidents or worse, fatality.

In conclusion, smartphone is beneficial for us and it has a great impact on our society, but it also gives us many problems and disadvantages like illness, addiction, and even accidents. Also, if you always hold your smartphone you can lose an opportunity to talk to other people face to face. If we have an actual conversation,we can express our feelings sincerely, like if I want to congratulate my friends, giving them a hug is much more heartfelt than a short email. Our society is distracted by the excessive use of the smartphone. Let's spend more time in actual conversation and just use our smartphones when we need it. Through this, we can use our smartphones wisely.

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Distractedwalking- as anything from walking while texting, tweeting, gaming,talking, surfing the web or listening to headphones

Hello Stella! We still need to strengthen your points. You can try to include anydata or studies in your speech to make it more realistic. Also, you may mention some of the accidents happened due to distracted walking. Nevertheless, I know that we can work this out. AJA!