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작성자 : kms***   ·   2017-08-22

Topic : way to solve problem
If I fight with my friends, I said sorry
Then my friends said sorry, too.
And next time we play funny.

If I fight with my brother, First I told
him about game or baseball.
Then he said sorry, and I said sorry, top.
Next time we don't fight

So I think If we have problem
Then the good way is saying sorry.

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CORRECTION/S:

Topic : Ways to Solve Problems
    If I fight with my friends, I will say sorry. Then my friends would say sorry, too. And next time we play and have fun.

    If I fight with my brother, first, I will tell him about games or baseball. Then he would say sorry, and I would say sorry and tap. The next day, we won't fight. So I think, if we have problems, then the good way is to say sorry.

BE MINDFUL of using conditional tenses, capitalization of nouns and sentence construction.

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