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Home work Novel 6
작성자 : har*** · 2017-08-18
They stared at the two dragons and the monster.
Then a big worm(Bigger the dragon and monster.Almost 70miter's high!)
But it have a sharp teet and a foot!
The big worm eat gold dragon!And same time,crystal dragon kill the monster.
Crystal dragon flew right infront of Kavin and Jack!
Kavin and Jack clime into Crystal dragon,and they flew to Cristal dragon's nest.
Cristal dragon was very kind.He(Cristal dragon was Male.)give them a cloth and wather to drink,and meal to eat!Cristal dragon kindly explaned our word is in the black hole and if you want to leave then you must find white hole.
-See you next at Home work Novel 7-
Then a big worm(Bigger the dragon and monster.Almost 70miter's high!)
But it have a sharp teet and a foot!
The big worm eat gold dragon!And same time,crystal dragon kill the monster.
Crystal dragon flew right infront of Kavin and Jack!
Kavin and Jack clime into Crystal dragon,and they flew to Cristal dragon's nest.
Cristal dragon was very kind.He(Cristal dragon was Male.)give them a cloth and wather to drink,and meal to eat!Cristal dragon kindly explaned our word is in the black hole and if you want to leave then you must find white hole.
-See you next at Home work Novel 7-
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They stared at the two dragons and the monster.
Then a big worm(Bigger the dragon and monster. Almost 70miter's high!)
But it have a sharp teeth and a foot!
The big worm eat gold dragon! And same time, crystal dragon kill the monster.
Crystal dragon flew right in front of Kavin and Jack!
Kavin and Jack clime into Crystal dragon, and they flew to Cristal dragon's nest.
Cristal dragon was very kind. He (Cristal dragon was Male.)give them a cloth and weather to drink, and meal to eat! Cristal dragon kindly explained our word is in the black hole and if you want to leave then you must find white hole.
-See you next at Home work Novel 7-
PS: Observe proper spacing.