Have you ever had conflict with your siblings? I think most sister and brother said "Yes.". Of course, we fight with them, but do you really hate your siblings? I don't think so. You are just upset that time, that isn't your real mind. So I want to focus on advantages about siblings.
      First, when you stay at home alone, maybe you feel a little bit scared. But when you stay with your siblings, you aren't. I think you will be happier than being alone because you can play the board game with them. Then, you can have a great time.
      Second, you can learn from each other. For example, sometimes your siblings said about your bad things, then you will be upset about it. Isn't it? But you must don't feel angry because you can know what you have to improve to become better before. Especially, you can study how you control your emotion. I think it is so important. When you control emotion, then you can improve your relationship with your friends.
       In conclusion, when you improve your relationship with your siblings, you can improve anything! 

     Thank you for reading my essay.

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-Word Choice

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That's excellent Jace! Thank you for accomplishing your essay! We'll talk more about this later in the class. Enjoy your day! See you! <3