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작성자 : bos***   ·   2017-08-10

I didn't want to be a class president.
because I think leader will be hard.
and I can't do something fun

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I don't want to be a class president, because I think being a leader would be hard and I can't do something fun.


Be mindful of the following:

- Verb tenses

- Punctuation mark

- Choice of word


Hello Jack, thank you for doing your homework. I just noticed that you've been committing same lapses, you should be careful when it comes to the tense of verb that you'll use. In addition, you could make it more than 1 paragraph. Take note of those Jack. See you later.

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