Llama's diary

I had a wonderful day today, because my friend and hisbrother visited me at home. Tae-in is a very unique person, and sometimes he makes us feel happy. For example, when he tried to catch me on an ice rink last time, he fell down with very a big whoop. He said aargh! But, he was okay. Today, we first played a card game, and of course I won. Then, we played push out stone (Alggagi). At first, Tae-in's brother, Tae-jung made a team with me, but whileI was killing Tae-in's stone, Tae-jung suddenly attacked me. In the end, I had no stone left and Tae-jung won the game. I was mad at him.So, in the next game, I killed all the stone that he got because I couldn't forgive him, but when it was time for us to go home I decided to forgive him. It was really a wonderful day.

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Hello Llama!Oh, that's why you didn't mention this amazing experience in the class earlier because you put this in your diary. Well, I'm hoping that every day will be awonderful day for you. It was great seeing you enjoying your summer vacation with your friends. Have a blast! Thank you for this entry!