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작성자 : sdk***   ·   2017-08-07

How can a person be completely healthy?


do not smoke, eat proper foods, exsercise ofen, let go of moneny.

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Do not smoke. Eat proper food. Exercise often. Let go of money.

Hello, Red! Your paragraph was able to answer the questions. It's good. But I hope there would be some explanations. Please take note of the ff. corrections:

* If a phrase expresses a complete thought and has a subject and a predicate, it could make one complete sentence.

* Always end a sentence with a period.

* Be careful of spelling.

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