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Home work Novel 3
작성자 : har*** · 2017-08-07
Chapter 3:-Blak hole,White hole-
Realy?Kavin's father said.
Amm,y...yes?Kavin said.
Jack shoutede,No way!We are not friend!
Kavin's father was very angry.
He shoutede,stop!I will kill you!
Aaa!Jack shoutede and he ran!
And Kavin and his father chased Jack.
But then Kavin catched Jack and
They fell into a strange hole!
They stop falling when they were landed in a dark place.
It was a blak hole!
-See you next at Home work Novel 4-
Realy?Kavin's father said.
Amm,y...yes?Kavin said.
Jack shoutede,No way!We are not friend!
Kavin's father was very angry.
He shoutede,stop!I will kill you!
Aaa!Jack shoutede and he ran!
And Kavin and his father chased Jack.
But then Kavin catched Jack and
They fell into a strange hole!
They stop falling when they were landed in a dark place.
It was a blak hole!
-See you next at Home work Novel 4-
답변
Chapter 3 :-Black hole, White hole-
"Really?" Kavin's father said.
"Ahmm, y...yes?" Kavin said.
Jack shouted, No way! We are not friend!
Kavin's father was very angry.
He shouted, "stop!I will kill you!'
Aaah! Jack shouted and he ran!
And Kavin and his father chased Jack.
But then Kavin caught Jack and
They fell into a strange hole!
They stop falling when they were landed in a dark place.
It was a black hole!
-See you next at Home work Novel 4-
"Really?" Kavin's father said.
"Ahmm, y...yes?" Kavin said.
Jack shouted, No way! We are not friend!
Kavin's father was very angry.
He shouted, "stop!I will kill you!'
Aaah! Jack shouted and he ran!
And Kavin and his father chased Jack.
But then Kavin caught Jack and
They fell into a strange hole!
They stop falling when they were landed in a dark place.
It was a black hole!
-See you next at Home work Novel 4-