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Quick to teacher Ronalyn~

작성자 : lov***   ·   2017-08-06

Hi teacher! How are you? (Are you fine?)I'm just pulling your leg teacher~ I'm sorry!
Today, I will talk about the stories that with our new idioms.
It was one of my dream. I was sleeping at the bed(in dream)and something fell to my face. I woke up and saw the money was falling threw to my room.
In one side I was happy to have a much moneys, but in other side I was worried.
Because when the money rain fall too much, my entire house will be full with money! So I can't live in there!
When the money was cover the floor, the money rain stopped. I was so happy to have much money, so I just freaked out.
I was dancing and running happily in my room.
Then something happened. I fell off, and when I wake up, the entire! Hole money was gone!!
It was my fault to freak out and fall off.
I was so sad...... Oh, what gonna I do!!!!

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Hi teacher! How are you? Are you fine? I'm just pulling your leg, teacher. I'm sorry!

 

Today, I will share about a story using our new idioms. It was one of my dreams. In my dream,  I was sleeping on my bed and something fell on my face. I woke up andsaw the money was falling from the ceiling. I was happy to have much money, but on the other hand, I was worried too. Because if it'll rain a lot of money,my entire house will be full with money! So, I can't live there! Also, if the money will cover the floor, the money will stop raining. I was so happy to have much money, so I just freakedout. As I was dancing and running happily around my room, I fell down and when I wokeup, the entire money was gone! It was my fault because I freaked out and fell down. I was so sad. Oh, what am I going to do?

 

POINTS TO REMEMBER:

Subject- verb agreement(One of the + plural nouns)

Preposition of place

Word choices (fall offvs. fall down)

Word order (what gonna Ido vs what am I going to do?)

 

Hello Super Connie! WOW!That was a good dream! You should have called me, so that I could go to yourroom and get some amount of money before you wake up. However, thank you forthis interesting homework. I truly appreciate this.

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