Bars & Melody: Hopeful          

They are brothers. The younger brother named Bars(13) was bullied at school. He wrote a rap song to overcome it. His older brother helped him and they auditioned in Britain's Got Talent using the rap song Bars composed. He overcame bullying through the rap song. This is why I like the song Hopeful.

Please remember the following:

*Capitalize the pronoun "I" wherever you placed it.

*Complete the thought of your sentences.

*Make use of articles, like "the".

Hello Stark! I'm very happy that you made a homework from last week! Great job Stark! I'm glad that you are adding a lot of details on your paragraph. Keep it up Stark! See you in class!

Always here to listen and help you,

T. Faith ^.^v