Hi teacher! Today, I will talk about my scariest dream ~
The dream had started when I was young.
Let's get start!
In my dream, I was already grown-up. I was driving a car with my friends.
We were going to a beach and it was dawn.
We were singing and dancing together! Then, there was a knocking sound.
We were scared, so we went to the mechanic and said," There is someone in our car! Look at this! Handprint on the car window!"
So, the mechanic started to erase the handprint with the wiper but it was no use. It was useless because the handprint was placed inside of the car window!
Isn't the story scary?
I was so shocked when I woke up. How about you teacher?
Let me know please~
ByeBye~

Things to remember:

1. Word Choice

2. Past tense

3. Punctuation marks

Hi Connie! Wow! That was a scary story! You are really a good storyteller. I hope you will not have a dream like that again. Thank you and see you soon!