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작성자 : seo*** · 2017-07-31
Hi! My name is Lily Jeong I am from Korea but I live in Taiwan.
This weekend I went to jing hua chong. It was really fun, I ride a big
slide and I went to the top of the ship.
when my friends come I wish I could go there with them.
I wish I could go with my friends because I can't talk to any one.
I can't make new friends also can't play anythingv like tag.
lt was fun but next time I want to go there with my friends.
Maybe on my birthday.
I forgot to tell you, the ship play ground is new!
I went there before but it was only 2 C.A.L things.
But l like the ship better and l love the slide.
I love to live in Taiwan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think l am one of the happy kids.
And the best thing is I love to be a one of the HAPPY KIDS!!!!
I LOVE TAIWAN!!!
BYE BYE.
This weekend I went to jing hua chong. It was really fun, I ride a big
slide and I went to the top of the ship.
when my friends come I wish I could go there with them.
I wish I could go with my friends because I can't talk to any one.
I can't make new friends also can't play anythingv like tag.
lt was fun but next time I want to go there with my friends.
Maybe on my birthday.
I forgot to tell you, the ship play ground is new!
I went there before but it was only 2 C.A.L things.
But l like the ship better and l love the slide.
I love to live in Taiwan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think l am one of the happy kids.
And the best thing is I love to be a one of the HAPPY KIDS!!!!
I LOVE TAIWAN!!!
BYE BYE.
답변
Hi! My name is Lily Jeong I am from Korea but I live in Taiwan.
This weekend I went to jing hua chong. It was really fun, I ride a big
slide and I went to the top of the ship.
when my friends come I wish Icolud could go there with them.
I wish I could go with my friends because I can't talk to anyone.
I can't make new friends and I also can't playanythings anything like a tag.
lt was fun but next time I want to go there with my friends.
Maybeat on my birthday.
I forgot to tell you, the ship play ground is new!
I went there before but it was only 2 C.A.L things.
But l like the ship better and l love the slide.
I love to live in Taiwan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think l am one of the happykid kids.
And the best thing is I love to be a one of the HAPPYKID KIDS!!!!
I LOVE TAIWAN!!!
BYE BYE.
This weekend I went to jing hua chong. It was really fun, I ride a big
slide and I went to the top of the ship.
when my friends come I wish I
I wish I could go with my friends because I can't talk to anyone.
I can't make new friends and I also can't play
lt was fun but next time I want to go there with my friends.
Maybe
I forgot to tell you, the ship play ground is new!
I went there before but it was only 2 C.A.L things.
But l like the ship better and l love the slide.
I love to live in Taiwan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think l am one of the happy
And the best thing is I love to be a one of the HAPPY
I LOVE TAIWAN!!!
BYE BYE.