Title:My best friend's house
Today,I went to my best friend's house. Her name is ??¿¹¿?. Sheis considerate and cares for herfriends. She is my best friend. Today, I went to her house and I ate some cookies. I went to the market and bought somenoodle, ice cream, and ??Æ÷. When I came back, I massaged my mother and her mom so I got 1000won. I wasvery happy and proud!!! I saved that money in my new piggy bank.
WhenI can save all my money, I will buy a big hotel in U.S.A. When I buy, I will say, "Come to myhotel". My best friend will be my forever friend. Thank you for listeningmy speech.^___________^
HelloChloe! I am surprised because I wasn't expecting you to share something herebut I am very happy to read your speech! I'm glad that you had a wonderful timewith your best friend. I hope that you and your best friend will have more funmemories to share with. BE HAPPY!!! J
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