Title: Go to the beach

Iwill go to the beach on August 5th with myfamily.

WhenI go there, I will find pearls and treasures.

Ifeel very happy and fun!!! I am going to take some pictures.

Mygrandma is there now. She said, "It's very wonderful and fresh here and I want to come here again with you."

Iwant to go there quickly.

Iwill play some games with my parent and grandparent. But I havea bad news because my dad is busy so he doesn't have free time.  I have to go there without him. But I am not unhappy. He promised me that we will go to thebeach together.

However, I think that placewill be very wonderful and beautiful.

I'mvery thankful to my mom and dad.

WOW!This is so awesome Chloe! I am pretty sure that you'll have a great time withyour family. Enjoy each moment with them and don't forget to always BE HAPPY!!!J

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