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작성자 : mir***   ·   2017-07-28

my dream house has a garden and it is floors and surrounded by not many bliding
so it is close to city but not in at the middle.
so it is a great house isn't it?
(im sorry that i have this homework late)

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CORRECTION/S:

    My dream house has a garden and its floors and surrounded by not many building. So, it is close to the city but not in at the middle.  So, it is a great house, isn't it?

(I'm sorry that I did this homework late.)

Hoony, kindly take note of the usage of proper capitalization and punctuations, spelling and articles.

Hi, Hoony! I could imagine your dream! Thank you for sharing this on your homework. Happy weekends! ^^
-Teacher Rose

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