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Should we have to delay the sleep to do our achievment???

작성자 : lov***   ·   2017-07-29

Hi teacher! Can we have to delay our sleep to do our achievement?
I don't think so.
Let's talk about it!
Well, we can just do our things.
But our health will be not that good.
So how can we sleep early at night, and be the 'early bird'?
Let's find out together.
First, we have to do our things in our times.
When do not do like that, we have to do things at night, or in our break time.
So, we have to do our things at the right time.
To second, we can do stretching at before bedtime.
When we do stretching at before bedtime, we can sleep more calmly.
And when we are sleeping, we can sleep like butterfly.
When I said that sleeping like butterfly, we have to sleep like shape of butterfly.
When we sleep like this, in next morning, our body will be feel relived.
Aren't we? Just like this, we have to think about health, not our achievement.
So, when you want to sleep more relive way, follow this words~
Someone don't, just they don't think about our health.
We have to care our health with our self.
Bye Bye~~^^

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Hi teacher! Can we have to delay our sleep to do our achievement?
I don't think so.
Let's talk about it!
Well, we can just do our thing, but our health will be not that good.
So how can we sleep early at night, and be an 'early bird'?
Let's find out together.
First, we have to do our tasks in our time.
If we can't do that, we have to do our tasks at night, or in our break time.
So, we have to do our tasks at the right time.

Second, we can do stretching at before bedtime.
When we do stretching at before bedtime, we can sleep more calmly and when we are sleeping, we can sleep like a butterfly.
When I said that sleeping like butterflies, we have to sleep like a shape of butterfly.
When we sleep like that, in the next morning, our body will be feel relieved.
Aren't we? Just like this, we have to think about our health, not our achievement.
So, when you want to sleep in a more relief way, follow these words~
If someone doesn't, they just don't think about their health.
We have to take care of our health by ourselves.
Bye Bye~~^^

 

Things to remember:

1. Use of Articles

2. Word spelling (difference of relive and relieve)

3. Use of pronouns

4. Prepositions (at, in)

 

Hi super Connie! You did well in your homework. Study about the things that you need to review and don't hesitate to ask me questions about it. By the way, thank you for that useful tip about sleeping like a butterfly. I will try it tonight. Thank you and see you soon!


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