Hi teacher~ Today, I will talk about 'How to be a real leader'.
If we want to be a real leader, we have to listen to our friends.
We should not yell to our friends and we can't be late to our meetings.
I have another one.
We have to be fair to everyone.
When we like someone, we care more about them but when we dislike someone, we don't care much about them.
We can't do like that. We should not!
We have to care about everyone and be fair!
If we want to be a nice leader, we have to be responsible.
Caring friends and being nice to them are what a leader should do.
If we want to be a leader, we have to be nice.
We always have to do good things first so everyone will behave like us.
That is all my opinion.
Like this, we have to try a lot of things.
When we try hard, we will be the world's nicest and most real leader!!
Bye Bye~~

Things to remember:

1. Word choice

2. Sentence Construction

3. Proper use of Articles (Ex. a, an, the)

4. Conjunctions (Ex. so, if, when)

Hi Connie! You are really such a great leader and no wonder that you are the president of your class. Continue to be a good leader and a good friend. Thank you and see you soon!