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Home work Novel 1
작성자 : har*** · 2017-07-27
Chapter 1: -Kavin and Jeck-
In the middle ages,there was a rich knight's son named Kavin.
He was 18 years old.He was very strong but he is not like study.
One day he was looking a horse in his yard,strange boy
in his age walk into his yard and kick him!
What?Who are you?Kavin shouted.
A strange boy said,who are who?
I meen you!He said and pick of the sored and swong at him.
Strange boy said,hahaha!I'm Jack!
You are not good at fighting!Jack said and he pick a stick and swong it toKavin!
It hit Kavin's head!Aaa...It's hurth!Aaa!
Kavin's father ran at Kavin.Are you okay?He said.
And he shoutede at Jack!Are you craze?Why did you hit my son?
-See you next at home work Novel 2-
P.S:Happy Thursday teacher!
In the middle ages,there was a rich knight's son named Kavin.
He was 18 years old.He was very strong but he is not like study.
One day he was looking a horse in his yard,strange boy
in his age walk into his yard and kick him!
What?Who are you?Kavin shouted.
A strange boy said,who are who?
I meen you!He said and pick of the sored and swong at him.
Strange boy said,hahaha!I'm Jack!
You are not good at fighting!Jack said and he pick a stick and swong it toKavin!
It hit Kavin's head!Aaa...It's hurth!Aaa!
Kavin's father ran at Kavin.Are you okay?He said.
And he shoutede at Jack!Are you craze?Why did you hit my son?
-See you next at home work Novel 2-
P.S:Happy Thursday teacher!
답변
Chapter 1: -Kavin and Jeck-
In the middle ages, there was a rich knight's son named Kavin.
He was 18 years old. He was very strong but he didn't like to study.
One day he was looking a horse in his yard, strange boy in his age walked into his yard and kicked him!
"What? Who are you?" Kavin shouted.
A strange boy said, "who are who?"
"I mean you!" He said and picked of the sword and swung at him.
The strange boy said, "hahaha! I'm Jack!" "You are not good at fighting!" Jack said and he picked a stick and swung it to Kavin!
It hits Kavin's head!" Aaa...It's hurts! Aaa!"
Kavin's father ran at Kavin. "Are you okay?" He asked And he shouted at Jack! Are you crazy? Why did you hit my son?"
-See you next at home work Novel 2-
In the middle ages, there was a rich knight's son named Kavin.
He was 18 years old. He was very strong but he didn't like to study.
One day he was looking a horse in his yard, strange boy in his age walked into his yard and kicked him!
"What? Who are you?" Kavin shouted.
A strange boy said, "who are who?"
"I mean you!" He said and picked of the sword and swung at him.
The strange boy said, "hahaha! I'm Jack!" "You are not good at fighting!" Jack said and he picked a stick and swung it to Kavin!
It hits Kavin's head!" Aaa...It's hurts! Aaa!"
Kavin's father ran at Kavin. "Are you okay?" He asked And he shouted at Jack! Are you crazy? Why did you hit my son?"
-See you next at home work Novel 2-