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작성자 : tnd*** · 2017-07-26
gain:get, increase
save: turn to
make: create, build
1.Item:TV
Price: twenty thousand dollars
Reason for selling:
Because my family bought new TV.
2.We can buy to things so cheap.
And we can earn some money.
3.We can fight for one thing. And some people sell things so expensive more than the things first price.
4.A garage slae is when you sell second hand. I think having a garage sale is
fun. If I have a garage sale, I will bring old dishes, old toys and clothing
out to sell because I don't use them anymore. I think having a garage sale is good because it can sell to things so cheap and we can earn some money.
save: turn to
make: create, build
1.Item:TV
Price: twenty thousand dollars
Reason for selling:
Because my family bought new TV.
2.We can buy to things so cheap.
And we can earn some money.
3.We can fight for one thing. And some people sell things so expensive more than the things first price.
4.A garage slae is when you sell second hand. I think having a garage sale is
fun. If I have a garage sale, I will bring old dishes, old toys and clothing
out to sell because I don't use them anymore. I think having a garage sale is good because it can sell to things so cheap and we can earn some money.
답변
gain:get, increase
save: turn to (to keep)
make: create, build
2. We can buy to cheap things. We can earn some money.
3. We can fight for one thing bid for the price and some people sell things so expensive, more than the things first price. its original price.
4. A garage sale is when you sell secondhand items. I think having a garage sale is fun. If I have a garage sale, I will bring old dishes, old toys and clothing clothes
out to sell to be sold because I don't use them anymore. I think having a garage sale is good because it can sell to things so cheap and we can earn some money.
Please be mindful of the following:
1. choice of words
2. run of the sentence
Thank you, Suji! Good job! 