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What is a good friend???????

작성자 : lov***   ·   2017-07-20

Hi teacher!! That song was fun ! Right?!
I really love that song !
Don't you teacher?
Now, lets move on to my homework.
I think it is good to having a best friend .
Because they are important to our lives.
When we are lonely, they can help us to not to be that lonely.
And I can also help them too.
And a good friend is being honest to friends.
When we do something bad to friend, we have to say sorry.
When we don't, they will be angry.
And the true friend is helping each other.
When friend and I are making picture, friend will color it and I will draw!
Isn't that nice?
Huh???
Bye Bye teacher~~

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    Hi teacher,  that song was fun. Right? I really love that song. Don't you teacher? Now, let's move on to my homework.I think it is good to have best friends because they are important to our lives.When we are lonely, they can help us not to be that lonely and you can also help them too. A good friend needs to be honest to their friends.When we do something bad to our friends, we have to say sorry.When we don't, they will be angry. A true friend helps each other. When my friend and I are making picture, my friend will color it and I will draw. Isn't that nice? Huh?


Things to remember:

1.Learn when to stop (or to use period (.)

2.Learn when to use Possessive pronoun (ex. my)

3. Proper usage of punctuation.

4. Learn to write in a paragraph.


Hello Connie! You such a good friend indeed. Good job for making your homework. Just continue exploring the world of English. Keep on!


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