A long time ago, there was a one country named Porance.There was Mr.Moore.
He was a very gentle and brave.
He didn't lose, and Moore??'s family were proud of him.
One day,he met the foolish and proud King.
He was very cruel,so he killed many people.
So his military was very disorder, many military and Mr.Moore went to their palace.
Mr.Moore wanted to change him.
He wanted a gentle and calm man.
So, he and other people did!
There was a war on the next day.
People were crying and many people died.
He was very upset because no one in bedroom of king.
The King ran away.
Peolple said, "You will be the next king!"
"Wow! Moore will be the King."
They thought he would agree.
But Mr.Moore said, "I can't become the King. I want to live with my family."
People were depressed and disappointed.
Then Mr.Moore said, "Rouis,come here!"
He was the Moore's loyal load.
Mr.Moore thought Rouis was better than him to become a king.
He said, "Rouis, you are better than me to become a king.
Rouis, wear the crown. You can become a great king."
Rouis said, "Okay, if I need your help, can you help me?"
He answered, "Sure."
They hugged and people greated.
People made a bow to King Rouis.
Porance become peaceful happy country.

Victoria, thank you so much for sending your work. I would like to tell some corrections about it, please be mindful of tenses, it should be consistent.

*Tense of the Verb "past simple"- an action or situation that was started and finished in the past.
"present simple"- an unchanging, repeated or reoccuring action or situation that exist only now.

You started your work with the statement "A long time ago", so it should be in the past tense. You can just change the tense if you have a dialogue that needs to include in the story.

Thank you so much!
-Teacher Yeena.