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Homework(The Pompeii Part2)

작성자 : dor***   ·   2017-07-18

In February of 63 A.D.,a big earthquake harmed a huge damage.But they rebuilt the Pompeii and the rebuilt Pompeii was better then the
Pompeii in the past.But like I told you earlier the Pompeii was destroyed again because of the great explosion.
But the most amazing thing is a beach was close to the volcano Vesuvius,and some people were swimming in the ocean.
And the few people who were swimming saved their lives!It's because some ashes were in the water.And different from the expectation
from the other people that died,the lava olny didn't spead to the direction of the sea.
However,now the Pompeii is a famous tourist destination for the people who likes to explore interesting spots.
But the people never know when the volcano Vesuvius will erupt again.

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In February of 63 A.D.,a big earthquake harmed a huge damage. But they rebuilt the Pompeii and the rebuilt Pompeii it was better then than the
Pompeii in the past. But like I told you earlier the Pompeii was destroyed again because of the great explosion.
But the most amazing thing is a beach was close to the volcano Vesuvius,and some people were swimming in the ocean.
And the few people who were swimming saved their lives! It's because some ashes were in the water.And different from the expectation
from the other people that died, the lava olny only didn't spead spread to in the direction of the sea.
However,now the Pompeii is a famous tourist destination for the people who likes to explore interesting spots.
But the people never know when the volcano Vesuvius will erupt again.

Thank you, Chris~! God job!

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