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I went to my friend's house.

작성자 : smi***   ·   2017-07-17

I went to my friend's house.
My friends name is 김민재,조영민
We played computer game,blocks and board game
It was so fun!
but we played too many played games!

답변

I went to my friend's house.

My friends name is ±?¹???,?¶¿?¹?
Correction: My friends' name is ±?¹??? and ?¶¿?¹?

We played computer game,blocks and board game
Correction: We played computer game, blocks and board game.

It was so fun!

but we played too many played games!
Correction: We played too many games!


TEACHER'S COMMENT:

Wow Henry~~!! You're awesome.
There are only few corrections in your sentences.
I'm so happy.

In addition, I haven't gave you any homework
but you made your own :D

Thank you and keep up the good work.

- Teacher Ella ᄏᄏ

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