I went to my friend's house.
My friends name is ±?¹???,?¶¿?¹?
Correction: My friends' name is ±?¹??? and ?¶¿?¹?
We played computer game,blocks and board game
Correction: We played computer game, blocks and board game.
It was so fun!
but we played too many played games!
Correction: We played too many games!
TEACHER'S COMMENT:
Wow Henry~~!! You're awesome.
There are only few corrections in your sentences.
I'm so happy.
In addition, I haven't gave you any homework
but you made your own :D
Thank you and keep up the good work.
- Teacher Ella ᄏᄏ