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작성자 : cha***   ·   2017-07-16

First my freinds a very kind.They always help each other.
Second my best friends are very silly.They always make me laugh.
Lastly I think that I need my friends to stay in the world.

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First, my friends are very kind. We always helpeach other.
Second, my best friends are very silly. They always make me laugh.
Lastly, I think that I need my friends to stayin the world.

 

 

 

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*ProperTenses of Verbs

*ProperPunctuation

*WordChoice / Composition

*Subject / Verb Agreement

*Proper Usage of Preposition, Conjunction and Article

* Observe Proper Spelling

 

 

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