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Homework - by.kelly
작성자 : dai*** · 2017-07-16
What can be done to avoid invasive insects in the Antarctica?
The insects are spreading really fastly in Antarctica. There could be lots of reasons why. But I think the main reason is that the Antarctica is getting warmer. Because lots of people go there and also because of the grobal warming. So it is getting too warmer so the insects are spreading really fast in the Antarctica. I think by slow down the grobal warming, we can avoid invasive insects in the Antarctica.
The insects are spreading really fastly in Antarctica. There could be lots of reasons why. But I think the main reason is that the Antarctica is getting warmer. Because lots of people go there and also because of the grobal warming. So it is getting too warmer so the insects are spreading really fast in the Antarctica. I think by slow down the grobal warming, we can avoid invasive insects in the Antarctica.
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The insects are spreading really quickly in Antarctica. There could be lots of reasons why. But I think the main reason is that the Antarctica is getting warmer. Because lots of people go there and also because of the global warming. So it is getting too warm so the insects are spreading really fast in the Antarctica. I think by slowing down the global warming, we can avoid invasive insects in the Antarctica.
Hello, Kelly! Please notice the orange line. That one needs to be rephrased as it is redundant.
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