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Home work Novel 11
작성자 : har*** · 2017-07-12
Harry was very surprised.H...h...how coued it be?Harry said.
There stoode the knights like this!
If the dragon died from wather the knights are come out of the dragon!Roid said.
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Hjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjf H
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii -jf-- --
Hjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjf H I
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I
I
It's very big and nice looking!Harry cried! I
I liked to have that long speard-------------------------------
That speared?Ha,Ha! I can make it!Harry bostede.
He pick of his wong and, poof the spear fell out the sky!
It landede exactly right ahede one knight's head!
He's deat!
I .
.
jf .--------- horse
.
.
Oh!Harry what did you do?
I just,just wantede to give you that spear.
Oups!There are coming!Run for your lives!
Roid run away.
But Harry was capchred.
What will I do? Harry cried.
-See you next at Home work Novel 12-
There stoode the knights like this!
If the dragon died from wather the knights are come out of the dragon!Roid said.
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Hjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjf H
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii -jf-- --
Hjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjf H I
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I
I
It's very big and nice looking!Harry cried! I
I liked to have that long speard-------------------------------
That speared?Ha,Ha! I can make it!Harry bostede.
He pick of his wong and, poof the spear fell out the sky!
It landede exactly right ahede one knight's head!
He's deat!
I .
.
jf .--------- horse
.
.
Oh!Harry what did you do?
I just,just wantede to give you that spear.
Oups!There are coming!Run for your lives!
Roid run away.
But Harry was capchred.
What will I do? Harry cried.
-See you next at Home work Novel 12-
답변
Harry was very surprised. "h...how could it be?" Harry said.
There stood the knights like this!
If the dragon died from water the knights are come out of the dragon!R oid said.
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Hjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjf H
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii -jf-- --
Hjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjf H I
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I
I
It's very big and nice looking! Harry cried! I
I liked to have that long speared-------------------------------
That speared? Ha Ha! I can make it! Harry boosted.
He pick of his wand and, poof the spear fell out the sky!
It landed exactly right ahead one knight's head!
He's death!
I .
.
ff .--------- horse
.
.
Oh! Harry what did you do?
I just , just wanted to give you that spear.
Oops! There are coming! Run for your lives!
Roid run away.
But Harry was captured.
What will I do? Harry cried.
-See you next at Home work Novel 12-
There stood the knights like this!
If the dragon died from water the knights are come out of the dragon!R oid said.
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Hjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjf H
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii -jf-- --
Hjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjf H I
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I
I
It's very big and nice looking! Harry cried! I
I liked to have that long speared-------------------------------
That speared? Ha Ha! I can make it! Harry boosted.
He pick of his wand and, poof the spear fell out the sky!
It landed exactly right ahead one knight's head!
He's death!
I .
.
ff .--------- horse
.
.
Oh! Harry what did you do?
I just , just wanted to give you that spear.
Oops! There are coming! Run for your lives!
Roid run away.
But Harry was captured.
What will I do? Harry cried.
-See you next at Home work Novel 12-