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What I have learned.....

작성자 : lov***   ·   2017-07-11

Hello teacher!
Today, I will talk about what I have learned in Stephanie's story.
Now, let's begin~
First of all, I learned about counting money.
And about when we open a garage sale, what we have to do, too.
Second, I've learned about that what we can sell in garage sale.
Third, I learned about that why we open garage sale.
We open it because when we don't use some things, we have to share or sell to help another people.
Some people will need 'em.
Fourth, I learned about the word, appliance.
That word means that we use it in electricity.
Am I right?
I am always thanks to you that you check my homework^^
Bye Bye^^

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Hello teacher!
Today, I will talk about what I have learned from Stephanie's story.
Now, let's begin~
First of all, I learned how to count money and what to do when we open a garage sale.
Second, I've learned about what we can sell in the garage sale.
Third, I learned about why we open a garage sale.
We open it because when we don't use something, we have to share or sell to help other people.
Some people will need 'em.
Fourth, I learned about the word, appliance.
That word means that we use it with electricity.
Am I right?
I am always thankful to you for you checking my homework. Bye Bye^^


Hi, Connie!
Thank you for coming in our class and I always admire how you participate in our class and how you do your homework. Please, take note of my correction. Proper usage of words in sentences.
-Teacher Joanna

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