I went to school.
And I learn dance.
I forget dance's name.
But,
It's very funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Better

I went to school and I learned to dance. I forgot the dance's name but it's very fun!

Points to Remember:

1. SIMPLE PAST TENSE: This verb tense is  when the action is simply mentioned and understood to have taken place in the past. The action started and ended sometime in the past but the time may or may not be mentioned.

Examples

I learn to dance. - I learned to dance.

I forget the dance's name. - I forgot the dance's name.

2. When you write a diary you should connect to the next sentence. It's you are going to jump to another sentence. And try to give more details about it.

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Hello Hana!

I think you can dance well :). But I want you to remember all the thing that I said to you especially in your homework. Because you are still doing the same mistake. Try to review all of this. The one you made is not a diary, it's a phrase only. Make it better next time. 

T.Marshiel^^