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작성자 : bos*** · 2017-07-10
If we do the group work, we can to it more good.
And we work with others so it will be more fast and fun too.
so we do it fun and fast to, it can be perfect.
that was the good thing of the group working.
And we work with others so it will be more fast and fun too.
so we do it fun and fast to, it can be perfect.
that was the good thing of the group working.
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If we work in a group, we can do things better. And if we work with others it'll be faster and fun too. So it can be perfect, this is the good thing about working in a group.
BE MINDFUL OF THE FOLLOWING:
- Word choice
- Comparative form of adjective
- Redundancy (avoid using same words)
- Tense of the word
Hi Jack, it is nice to know that you still see something good in working as a group. We'll talk about this tomorrow! ALSO, kindly check on the corrections that I have given. Goodnight!