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Me and my BFF

작성자 : gec***   ·   2017-07-09

Today, I’m going to write about my BFF jian.
My BFF and I are in the same classroom. So we hang out a lot. My teacher calls us ‘set combo menu’ compared to “Macdonald’s happy meal set’. We like insulting each other, so we devoted hard to decide if we are a set menu, whose the ‘cola’ and whose the ‘Burgur’. We made a dicision that we are both straws of the cola… ㅜㅜ.
We have our own signals and languages. It’s not like we make up words, we just combine words and make a particular sentence. The ones we mostly uses are
1. Oh! This is an insult
2. Victory~!
3. I feel highly discomfort
Other than that we uses ‘Arggh’ and ‘Oh No’ a lot too. And we lately invented a new signal. It’s called ‘d~~’.
The meaning of this signal is to insult someone that has a D shape-body. We just make ‘d’ shape without fingers.
Our classmates think our languages are interesting and copy them.
So at this point we feel highly discomfort. Arrggh~~! So now my BFF and I are just ignoring them.
My BFF and I has lot it common.
For example
1. We are both a prize pupil in school.
2. We both like weird things.. etc
So I hope our relationship stays on for a long time.
Thank you.

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Today, I'm going to write about my BFF Jian.
My BFF and I are in the same classroom. So we hang out a lot. My teacher calls us 'set combo menu' compared to "Macdonald's happy meal set'. We like insulting each other, so we devoted hard to decide if we are a set menu, whose the 'cola' and whose the 'Burgur'. We made a dicision decision that we are both straws of the cola' ¤?¤?.
We have our own signals and languages. It's not like we make up words, we just combine words and make a particular sentence. The ones we mostly uses are
1. Oh! This is an insult
2. Victory~!
3. I feel highly discomfort
Other than that we uses use 'Arggh' and 'Oh No' a lot too. And we lately invented a new signal. It's called 'd~~'.
The meaning of this signal is to insult someone that has a D shape-body. We just make 'd' shape without fingers.
Our classmates think our languages are interesting and they copy them.
So at this point we feel highly discomfort. Arrggh~~! So now my BFF and I are just ignoring them.
My BFF and I has lot have a lot it in common.
For example
1. We are both a prize (size?) pupil in school.
2. We both like weird things.. etc.
So I hope our relationship stays on for a long time.
Thank you.

Wow! Thank you for writing about your friendship with Jian, Dianne~!

Be mindful of the the following:

1. SPELLING
2. has/have
3. choice of words

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