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homework - I think birthday is important.
작성자 : cal*** · 2017-07-07
I think birthday is important.
First, being born is thing to celebrate.
Second, he or she has only birthday.
Finally, birthdau gives a rest.
First, being born is thing to celebrate.
Second, he or she has only birthday.
Finally, birthdau gives a rest.
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I think birthday is important. First, being born is a thing to celebrate. Second, he or she has only one birthday. Finally, birthday gives a rest.
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I agree with you Cale! Indeed, birthdays are really important. Thank you for sharing Cale! May you have a fantastic weekend ahead! <3