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I am very passionate!

작성자 : bid***   ·   2017-07-05

I feel very excited today.Today our school finished at 2:15.Usually, it ends at 3:45, but the seniors finished the exam early, so, we finished early.But I had a test at the academy so I came back home and studied.But it was very pleasant because it was so easy.Well, I guess I can get a good grade on this exam! If you take good grade with this exam, they give price to him or her. So, this time, I feel more passionate! Please, pray for me to get good grades!

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I feel very excitedtoday. Today, our classes at school finished at 2:15.Usually, it ends at 3:45 but the seniors finished the exam ahead of timeso we finished early, too but I had a test at the academy so I had to go back home and study. I was very pleased because the exam was so easy. Well, I guess I can get good grades on this exam. If you get good grades on this exam, they will give you aprize.  So this time, I feel more passionate. Please pray for me to get good grades!

 

Hi, Jack! Thank youfor taking the initiative to share the things that happened to you that makesyou feel overwhelmed.

 

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You did a wonderfuljob doing this one, Jack. Review these reminders that I have for you. It willhelp you a lot in achieving your dream as an exceptional novelist in thefuture. Yes, I will pray for the best results on your exam. I know you can doit! Study hard, Jack! 

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