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My family.

작성자 : gec***   ·   2017-07-05

Today, I'm going to write a story about my family.
First, she is a computer programer.
She likes to sleep, relex and to rest. My mom doesn't like working all day and have busy schedule. That's why she doesn't like camping very much. My mom works and when she's home, she have a lot of things to do. So on the weekends, she practically rest all day!
Second, he is a computer programmer too. He likes to sleep, watch TV, going camping and to eat after dinner. My dad loves to eat. Not foods like healthy stuff but foods like bear, ramen and crisp. My mom says the reason he's fat is because he eats at the nightime. I think so too. When I go to dad's room at night, he's always eating something. I guess he appease he's stress by eating a late plate.
Lastly she likes pestering me. She likes to play. She alays interrupts me when I'm studying but It's fun to play with her. We play games together like Uno, Bluemorble. Eventhough she's somtimes really annoying I'm glad to have her (maybe).
My Family members has a different personallity, but we are a happy bunch.

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Today, I'm going to write a story about my family.
First, she is a computer programer programmer.
She likes to sleep, relex relax and to rest. My mom doesn't like working all day and have a busy schedule. That's why she doesn't like camping very much. My mom works and when she's home, she have has a lot of things to do. So on the weekends, she practically rests all day!
Second, he is a computer programmer too. He likes to sleep, watch TV, going camping and to eat after dinner. My dad loves to eat. Not foods like healthy stuff, but foods like bear, ramen and crisp. My mom says the reason he's fat is because he eats at the nigh-time.(midnight) I think so too. When I go to dad's room at night, he's always eating something. I guess he appease he's his stress by eating a late plate.
Lastly, she likes pestering to pester me. She likes to play. She alays always interrupts me when I'm studying, but It's fun to play with her. We play games together like Uno, Bluemorble. Eventhough she's somtimes really annoying I'm glad to have her (maybe).
  

My Family members has have a different personallity personality, but we are a happy bunch.

Thank you so much, Dianne~! I enjoyed reading your story!

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