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작성자 : eli***   ·   2017-07-03

I am so upset.
So I angry to my mom.
But I so worried,because if my mom is angry,I`m very scared!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But mom is doesn`t angry to me.
So,I`m so wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
( story )

답변

I am so upset.
I got angry to my mom but I worried that my mom will get angry as well. I`m very scared!
But mom didn`t get angry to me.
So, I`m so wonderful!
( story )

REMINDERS:
1. Always remember to complete your sentence by including a subject and a predicate. Subject- it is the topic that us being talked about. Predicate- it describes the subject. ex: I got angry to my mom.
2. Let's use but to connect a positive and negative ideas to form a compound sentence.
3. We use "didn't" if the action in the sentence has been done.

Hi, Ellie!
Don't worry I feel the same way to my mom when I got mad at her. Our mothers are always loving and understanding. Let's always pay them respect and love. Thank you.
-Teacher Joanna

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