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작성자 : rac***   ·   2017-07-03

I literally was experienced the embarrassed day in a year.
My study was not finished yet, So I made a desicion while waithing for attending class here.
Honestly, I thought all is well.
I found the wifi zone, but There are not many places where that is possible.
I was to face a dilemma.
Fortunately, I found some place where the wifi is connect.
However, It encounter poor internet connection.
I really sorry to you that I felt ruin your lesson.
I never atttend the class in the library.

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        I was literally experienced the embarrassed day in a year. My studies was not yet finished. So, I made a desicion while waiting to our class. Honestly, I thought all is well. I found out the wifi zone, but there are many places where not that possible. I was to face a dilemma.
Fortunately, I found some place where the wifi is connected. However, I encountered poor internet connection. I'm really sorry for that. I will never atttend the class in the library.

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Hello, Rachel. Thank you for doing your homework. Don't you worry about what happened in our class a while ago. I really understand that you need to study in the library. Anyway, be heedful about my corrections. I'll see you again tomorrow. Have a great night!

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