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작성자 : dwc*** · 2017-07-03
Today i get up at 7:00.
I went to school and i studied math and P.E. .
I am back to my home and i ate ice cream.
Today is good day!!!
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2017 / 7 / 3
Hello Diary,
This is what happened today. First, I get up at 7:00 am. Next, I went to school and studied math and P.E. Then, I came back home and ate ice cream. Today is a good day!!!
Please remember the following:
*be mindful of the capitalization of words.
- If you use I in a sentence, it should always be capitalize regardless of where you place it.
*make use of sequence adverbs in describing the order of your actions.
-e.g. first, next, then, finally
A marvelous Monday for you Stark! Great job for answering your homework! Great job with your grammar! You are doing great! Keep on improving Stark! Strive to be happy always and never ever compare yourself to others, for always, there will be lesser or greater person than yourself!
Always here to listen and to help you,
Teacher Faith ^.^v